Alright there was something I knew had to be changed. That was the blurb of my story. On what it is all about to get people’s attention, but to not give alot away.

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Prince Liam of Derzeli believes differently in what honor means. King Breen, Liam’s father, and Cullen, Liam’s brother, believe that true honor is achieved once they slay a dragon. Liam believes that dragons are majestic and do not deserve to die.

King Breen, Liam’s father, brings Liam along on an expedition to slay a dragon. On one of the nights of the expedition, Liam rescued a dragon’s egg. Liam decides to care for it, and it hatches on Liam’s birthday.

Tragedy strikes, which leads to Liam having to leave Derzeli, and Liam goes on the run with the help of Ella the dragon. Ella helps him escape, and runs to a barren wasteland where he saw himself to becoming a hermit for the rest of his life. But due to an event happening with the help of a new friend, and a childhood friend he has no choice but to return home. Having to make the decision to run away from his destiny, or embrace it, the destiny of a king.”

What I had before was way to much. What I want more than anything are to have reviews. Something that was a major hard point was me trying to be like the hunger games and have it be in first person. Something that is never going to happen again for sure.