It may be my first book but people have said they like it! The next book I’m taking more time on!

It may be my first book but people have said they like it! The next book I’m taking more time on!

Alright there was something I knew had to be changed. That was the blurb of my story. On what it is all about to get people’s attention, but to not give alot away.
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Prince Liam of Derzeli believes differently in what honor means. King Breen, Liam’s father, and Cullen, Liam’s brother, believe that true honor is achieved once they slay a dragon. Liam believes that dragons are majestic and do not deserve to die.
King Breen, Liam’s father, brings Liam along on an expedition to slay a dragon. On one of the nights of the expedition, Liam rescued a dragon’s egg. Liam decides to care for it, and it hatches on Liam’s birthday.
Tragedy strikes, which leads to Liam having to leave Derzeli, and Liam goes on the run with the help of Ella the dragon. Ella helps him escape, and runs to a barren wasteland where he saw himself to becoming a hermit for the rest of his life. But due to an event happening with the help of a new friend, and a childhood friend he has no choice but to return home. Having to make the decision to run away from his destiny, or embrace it, the destiny of a king.”
What I had before was way to much. What I want more than anything are to have reviews. Something that was a major hard point was me trying to be like the hunger games and have it be in first person. Something that is never going to happen again for sure.
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Description:Prince Liam of Derzeli believes differently in what honor means. King Breen, Liam’s father, and Cullen, Liam’s brother, believe that true honor is achieved once they slay a dragon. Liam believes that dragons are majestic and don’t deserve to die. Liam is very close with his brother. Lady Anna of Lorne, is the object of Liam’s affection. Liam has loved her since they were children. Cullen is promiscuous, and he wants to settle down with someone. Cullen wants to settle down with Lady Anna. Lady Anna is in love with Liam. King Breen brings Liam along on an expedition to slay a dragon. Lady Anna joins along. Liam and Anna have a very passionate evening in the woods. The night after Liam and Anna find a dragon’s egg. Liam decides to care for the egg until it hatches. Anna wants to help as much as she can. The egg hatches on Liam’s birthday. King Breen realizes that he needs to reach out to Liam for communication. King Breen extends an invitation for Liam to meet with him in his room, so they can chat. Liam finds Breen dead. The weapon that was used to murder Breen was Liam’s sword. Liam goes on the run. Ella, the dragon that was in the egg, flies Liam away to the badlands. It is a barren wasteland. Liam and Ella encounter Dain. Dain has been alone for 20 years. Dain used to be a prince. Liam remains in the badlands for five years. Liam then realizes that he has to get back to the Land of the Four. Liam, Cullen, and Jon, Liam’s childhood friend, must travel to the Home of Protectors to find information on the enemy, Atlin. Liam is told that Cullen has taken over the throne with Atlin by his side. Everyone has bowed down to King Cullen, exept for Lorne. Lorne will die unless Liam and his allies can make it back to Derzeli to write some wrongs. Liam may have to decide if he wants to run away from his destiny, or embrace it, the destiny of a king.
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